Eyes Of Silver Comments

Hello ray. I like you missed a lot of schooling (relating to your foot notes) and I only started trying pen to paper a couple of years ago and I am unable to master punctuation.... A form of dyslexia I believe. Anyway on another site I put a few poems down and was slaughtered I mean totally slaughtered by some over ridged scholar types who never read what I wrote just tore into me for my punctuation. I was devastated nearly gave up and thought no I need writing as my relief and just worked what suited me best. Anyway back to your work. It is lovely and the the flow and as I see it symbolism of gold and silver expressing super adoration is just beautiful. I love the way when you hit the coldness of your soul it is a much shorter flow and seems to cut the poem short. Signifying to me an almost apology....tyvm karen