Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Eyes Of Prevention Comments

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My 2nd poem. A lot of feeling into this because I turned my life around and I'm still amazed by how I did it. I try to write poems now instead of drinking when I feel something. I love feedback, I want to become better at writing so please feel free to criticize. I promise not to write an intro on every poem.

Nobody’s choice of fate is self-brutality.
Each day another victim is blindsided by motives of immorality,
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David Scott 15 October 2009

Great insight. I started writing again for similar reasons, and it is great to be able to express your inner struggle to people that appreciate a story with a happy ending.

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Kellie Imer 15 October 2009

again....Amazing. I'm glad you turned your life around. I'm sure it was extremely hard. Thanks for sharing! !

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