Monday, October 5, 2009

Eyes Of Pity Comments

Rating: 5.0

(part 2 of deaths breath)

everyones eyes,
spoke to me with such pity, as they're mouth spoke lies
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krissi b'williams
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Olympia Melone 11 December 2009

excellent to the follow up of deaths breath

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Deja B'williams 28 November 2009

so far ive read about 30 of your poems, and ive got to say youve got a great gift in the way you express yourself, the emotions that flow through your words...brilliant

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heartfelt poem..i know how you feel..wishing you are well..will read the other part...

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Eyan Desir 07 October 2009

We shouldnt fear death they is no escape faith in God is all you need Good write

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moribund love 07 October 2009

what I liked here is the emotions accuracy.10+++

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Cortney Rauzmen 05 October 2009

omgosh! i love it...i like how intense it is!

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