Eyes Of Mr D (Part 5) Comments

So the hero saves the the day and gets the girl no doubt... Or does he...? 10

BRAVO David! ! ! ! ! ! ! I couldn't have done it better myself! ! ! You did an awesome job...simply awesome. It was very entertaining...provocative...and kept your readers on the edge of their seats! ! My hat is off to you good sir! ! Hugs, Dee

Well, now I am confused. Who exactly is Mr D? ? There's more to him than meets the eye (pardon the pun) . And the man in the death mask? What is happening? .....I have the feeling that there is more, much more, to come. I'm going to keep my beady eye on your pages, Dave... Love, Fran xxx

Well, call me stupid and now I will be up even later than usual....Like JoAnn said, you have left the dang door wide open since the evil man is not dead but is Henry really blind? ? ? ? Sorry Dave, this is not the end......Come on now, be nice...Excellent write but......you are still teasing us with this....I think it is going from a short story to a novel at this juncture......marci.x0

Oh.............you have left the door open for more.......and such a twist at the end....Henry De Ath.....which one should she really be scared of...MMMMmmmm So many questions left unsolved here...definitely call for more