Thursday, June 7, 2007

Eyes Of Mr D (Part 3) Comments

Rating: 5.0

(The author recommends that you read Parts One and Two before reading this.)


For a week, he frantically looked
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David Harris
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Dee Daffodil 10 June 2007

I bet I know what he had seen at the park! ! David...I am so glad to see this art form take off! ! Well done my friend! ! Hugs, Dee

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Francesca Johnson 08 June 2007

This is the end.......isn't it? David, you have got me eagerly wondering what could possibly happen now.... You're a REAL story teller - my advice to you is this: GET PUBLISHED. Love, Fran, hanging in suspense and waiting for Part 4 xxx

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Marci Made 07 June 2007

Oh dear, this is not going where I thought it was, up first, than curious, now perhaps suicide....goodness you could write an excellent mystery story or novel.Perhaps another James Patterson in the making...He's big on short chapters leaving the reader unable to put down the book....off to number 4, well at least arriving late, I can read them all as one............so far, marvelous and captivating tales of the poor old guy.............marci. :)

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JoAnn McGrath 07 June 2007

Oh...you are wicked......keeping us in such suspense......You have me on the edge of me seat.....waiting

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