Tuesday, June 5, 2007

Eyes Of Mr D (Part 2) Comments

Rating: 5.0

A few days later,
the newspapers tell the story
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David Harris
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Dee Daffodil 10 June 2007

Hmmm...now you've got me wondering...who and why did he get the set of eyes that he did? ? ? Did they come from the murderer...or from someone who had a psychic gift that they couldn't bare to deal with anymore? ? ! ! Awesome work! Hugs, Dee

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Marci Made 07 June 2007

Now I am thinking as the wonder builds is it the dead girls eyes he has received or did some magical thing [miracle] happen that now he can see the future before it happens......Has the makings so far of a great, can't wait for the next chapter story.....off I go to find it as it appears I've arrived late to partake of this delight.~~~marci. :)

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Francesca Johnson 06 June 2007

Oops, I forgot to vote on the last one, I was so eager to get here! And I'm still left wondering..... A cliffhanger or what? Come on, David, get your magic pen out... Love, Fran xxx

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JoAnn McGrath 05 June 2007

More......more........I love suspense...: O)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 05 June 2007

Its more like a book, in that you cant wait for the next chapter...10

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