Monday, June 4, 2007

Eyes Of Mr D (Part 1) Comments

Rating: 5.0

For Dee Daffodil
The queen of this sort of thing.
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David Harris
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Dee Daffodil 10 June 2007

David! ! , I am so impressed so far! ! ! Your timing of the cliff-hanger...is superb! ! On to the next! Hugs, Dee

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Marci Made 07 June 2007

Goodness, here I was thinking well maybe people aren't crazy to have their eyes messed with as this chap seemed so happy, than WHOMP! out of the blue it took a turn.....need to find part 2. marci.)

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Francesca Johnson 06 June 2007

Just like Andrew, I was drifitng along on a wave of feel-goodness, and then..... POW! Am thirsting to know what happens next...... Very intriguing! So far, so good, David (well, for the reader, anyway) . Love, Fran xxx

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JoAnn McGrath 04 June 2007

Ditto on Andy's thaughts...WOW...can't wait for the sequil

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 June 2007

I started reading then thought this is nice, some one seeing the world again regaining his sight... Then wham in to a horror story, cant wait for part 2...10

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