Monday, May 7, 2007

Eyes Of Envy Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watch you kiss him;
holding him like he was me.
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Brian Hinckley
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Riquetta Elliott 25 December 2007

I know how jealously can get to you believe me I'm having that experience right now and I can relate to the problem too, but I concur it is a very good piece and a memorable one that you wrote. Good work keep on writing.

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Michael Fischer 16 May 2007

Great...simply great. I liked the part about your former lady friend and her new lover holding a portion of your heart when they hold hands. You definitely have a knack for writing some very memorable poetry. Top marks! -Michael

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