Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Eyes Of A Killer Comments

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Keep the faith to your self, walk the plank to survive
Breathe in the filth of the air, let them go astray
Watch them die like the animals they are
Don’t look back, turn your face and walk away
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Eric Joseph Lopez
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Melissa Miller 09 June 2009

Really good. I may just comment on all your poems. This is more devilish and I liked it lol. I like how you put yourself into the minds of others, but still maintain the feel as if they are your own thoughts, I Mean this with all your poems. Well done all over really.

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Jennifer Hoffman 03 June 2009

this one really touched me

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Harashia Crawford 03 June 2009

whoa... that's really deep

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