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What could somebody do but mark with a humble ten a shining gem! Thank you! !

Your poetic language is so rich, full of poetic wealth! This is such a beautiful read! You truly inspire! ; D

Wow a very beautiful piece of poetry...enjoyed it so much..10+++.thanks for sharing...

'getting drugged by music' i often wondered1 but now i know, a wonderful piece of poetry..your poetry too puts one in a trance

A good poem always makes you read it more than once, so that you can completly understand it. This poem in particular made me think, and that is what poetry is about.

nive piece., , it touches life of a true musician..

It is strange when written words seem to have a voice, and sounds and sights mingle into your senses, and speaks to you on a sublime level. Eyes Half Veiled, senses, more than just words...

oscillates in vale of tune by the octets of flute betiding across the jingles of Florence beneath musky mango grove Oh it is incoming of spring virile.! heart encores in tunes of rhythm really best to read, it is a signet to our poem bestwishes

this poem was great. i love how you word everything!

A soothing write embellished with music and colours....Like marie I am no longer able to cast my vote on this site..this merits a 10++

all tge emptiness of universe is filled with rhythmic dances of colores and notes of love songs, and heart felt emotions knock at your door, and you awaken in love standing before you...........i am listening Ravi Shastri with his magical flute and string and writing masnavi with quill

sir......this poem of eternal beauty has been so wonderfully poticized here....thanks for sharing....

Hello Sir.... Spring has inspired so many poets and poems......and once again your poem is a fitting tribute to this season of paradise.its beautiful.....thank you for sharing..... Sridevi.

Hello Sir.....Spring has been poeticized so beautifully here as also the pair of those lovely eyes....short....sweet and eloquent.

Hi, subhendu, -Beautifully... Moods of spring corresponds through fine eyes...10... All the best, Tsira

Veiled eyes are a very striking image. The music of the words stirs the music of remembered springs in me. Regards, Callie