Eyes Full Of Tears Comments

good work Aarif...lines deeply expressive...10

Eyes Full of Tears..... no sheeding of tears and it should never roll out from eyes.....beaitiful write dear.. kaka in hindi belt is father's borther. in punjabi it is for small boy.. I, yur grand uncle so kaka is appropriate even in my language... hahahah read mine 'cry not' and comment me back.... reagards and love

this is really a good write., the sequence of lines are properly arranged..beautiful...grace

Tearsome and nice 10++

mirror is refection of correct things. i hve poem titles'cry not' in this hunter poem

hey...this is really sad..wow, i hope this isn't true...very deep..i felt it..it just got to me, vry well written...keep it up~

Good work Aarif.... keep this pen pumpin' shabaash

'The love that I served Will ring in your nerves' Beautiful The ability to say much without using many words is a gift, use it more. Thanks for sharing 10+

That is life...don't mind but go on to next poem...10+