Thursday, March 2, 2006

Eyes Don'T Tell Lies In The Dark Comments

Rating: 3.5

Eyes don’t tell lies in the dark
Faces smile, lovingly close,
no need for conversation,
seeking each others lips.
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peter rodenby
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Mary-Elizabeth Conn 18 April 2006

Wow- great poem! It's very vivid. Keep up the good work :)

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Joseph Daly 15 April 2006

Great piece Peter. The repetition of the first line is an excellent bonus to a wonderful, heartfelt poem. The words you have used virtually drool off the screen and the form, with its economy creates a gem of a piece.

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