Thursday, March 2, 2006
Eyes Don'T Tell Lies In The Dark Comments
Rating: ★3.5
Eyes don’t tell lies in the dark
Faces smile, lovingly close,
no need for conversation,
seeking each others lips.
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Joseph Daly
15 April 2006
Great piece Peter. The repetition of the first line is an excellent bonus to a wonderful, heartfelt poem. The words you have used virtually drool off the screen and the form, with its economy creates a gem of a piece.
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7/27/2025 11:41:20 AM # 1.0.0
Wow- great poem! It's very vivid. Keep up the good work :)