As I gaze into your eyes,
I delve into your being.
Travel in your overwhelming vastness,
in hidden spaces,
...
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very terrific piece.. thoughts are maturely thought of... really wonderful....meaningful ...eyes...the mirror of love...the mirror of anyone's feelings... i like this.....10++++
what wonderful expressions you displayed through this brilliant poem....superb...10
wow! ! ! ! ! eyes they are the mirrors of ones soul beautiful sarvesh. I liked this ++++10 anjali (somewhat similar to mine read this Your Beautiful Eyes)
melting down into those eyes...good piece, Sarvesh...awe fillied lines...sweet and softly romantic...10
Sarvesh, I've written many poems prompted by eyes. You capture all the depth and vastness of eyes. You are marvellous, wonderful, it all comes out here. Mark
I am captivated by your wording in this poem. A wonderful imaginative delightful poem. The words touching, and filled with emotion. A great write
the maturity of thought n expression i see in what u write amazes me, sarvesh!
hats off.....why didnt i read this before........brilliant write