Tuesday, December 9, 2008

Eyes (Dedication) Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I gaze into your eyes,
I delve into your being.
Travel in your overwhelming vastness,
in hidden spaces,
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Sarvesh Kulkarni
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Reshma Ramesh 08 June 2009

hats off.....why didnt i read this before........brilliant write

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Miriam Maia Padua 06 April 2009

very terrific piece.. thoughts are maturely thought of... really wonderful....meaningful ...eyes...the mirror of love...the mirror of anyone's feelings... i like this.....10++++

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Vaibhav Pandey 29 March 2009

what wonderful expressions you displayed through this brilliant poem....superb...10

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Anjali Sinha 16 December 2008

wow! ! ! ! ! eyes they are the mirrors of ones soul beautiful sarvesh. I liked this ++++10 anjali (somewhat similar to mine read this Your Beautiful Eyes)

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Kesav Easwaran 15 December 2008

melting down into those eyes...good piece, Sarvesh...awe fillied lines...sweet and softly romantic...10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 December 2008

superb sarvesh! wonderful composition! ......10+

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Mark Nwagwu 12 December 2008

Sarvesh, I've written many poems prompted by eyes. You capture all the depth and vastness of eyes. You are marvellous, wonderful, it all comes out here. Mark

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Tj Becker 09 December 2008

I am captivated by your wording in this poem. A wonderful imaginative delightful poem. The words touching, and filled with emotion. A great write

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Indira Babbellapati 09 December 2008

the maturity of thought n expression i see in what u write amazes me, sarvesh!

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