Sunday, December 2, 2012

Eyes Are Real Comments

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her bold shameful eyes
looks better when she shys
I want to be in her
wishing GOD for it to occur
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Vizard Dhawan
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Masarapu Navyasree 04 December 2012

very nice writing.so sweet

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Masarapu Navyasree 04 December 2012

very nice writing.so sweet

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Indranil Bhaduri 03 December 2012

Fantastic writing...keep it up, need more...

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Kaila George 03 December 2012

Oh this one is so sweet....and what gets me is the fact that you dont care about her glassess as it should be...beauty is held within the eyes of the beholder...hmmm is that right...smiles...loved this one

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Hazel Durham 03 December 2012

Nice poem, if you don't mind me saying you would need to spend more time editing your poem, very promising!

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