Monday, August 25, 2014

Eyes Are Dry...Still I Cry... Comments

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Eyes are dry...still I cry...
I like to walk with you; I like to cry on your shoulder,
Oh my grandpa where have you lost I really wonder!
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Mary Douglas 26 August 2014

A weeping poem, the poem itself is weeping. very heartfelt. I am certain wherever he is and I'm sure in a good and heavenly place such a kind grandfather must be, that he has read this ooem and is happy that you honored him so much, that he heard you so that finally the weeping poem is a reason to smile. Poet has great ability to convey personal feeling through poetry, just need a little bit more knowledge about connecting words, and proper word order in English but this is easy to learn. Poetic gift cannot be learned but is present in the soul from childhood I believe and that poetic gift is already there. Very moving. Mary Angela Douglas

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Neela Nath Das 25 August 2014

You miss your grandpa.It's very clear that the sense of loss has made you write this poem.

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