Eyes and nose
With impacts I came home
In the heat, cold no more.
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Vey nice indeed pen and ink at hand you write from, I can see sir, the heart thanks.
Why not do very best? Chose the words, wrote poem. A different poem, a deserving selection as members poem of the day, congrats.
Aw, it was just getting interesting! But I guess you're right. My Art work isn't too bright but words offer sound and color too. Well done on poem of the day. Liked it a lot!
This poem reminds me of the song IF popularized by BREAD......... nice piece++++++++++++ Congrats on being chosen.......
One can paint a pretty picture with words as well as with drawings. You have painted this one well. Congratulations on poem of the day!
What a great way to entice the reader. Visualize the drawing. Then drop it. And then remember the words. Brilliant! !