Sunday, November 27, 2016

Eyes And Nose Comments

Rating: 3.6

Eyes and nose

With impacts I came home
In the heat, cold no more.
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Nassy Fesharaki
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Richard Wlodarski 16 June 2017

What a great way to entice the reader. Visualize the drawing. Then drop it. And then remember the words. Brilliant! !

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Paul Brookes 17 December 2016

Vey nice indeed pen and ink at hand you write from, I can see sir, the heart thanks.

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Nassy Fesharaki 18 December 2016

Thank you very much and sorry for delay.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 December 2016

Why not do very best? Chose the words, wrote poem. A different poem, a deserving selection as members poem of the day, congrats.

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Clarence Prince 16 December 2016

Why not do very best? Yes, it's best to do very best!

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Tom Billsborough 16 December 2016

Aw, it was just getting interesting! But I guess you're right. My Art work isn't too bright but words offer sound and color too. Well done on poem of the day. Liked it a lot!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 December 2016

This poem reminds me of the song IF popularized by BREAD......... nice piece++++++++++++ Congrats on being chosen.......

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Kim Barney 16 December 2016

One can paint a pretty picture with words as well as with drawings. You have painted this one well. Congratulations on poem of the day!

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 December 2016

Chinese Girl. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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