Friday, November 25, 2016

Eyes (About Kashmir) Comments

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Those eyes, that used to light up
on seeing me come home
those eyes, which just a week back
with EIDI in hand shone.
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B U Afnan
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Chinedu Dike 01 March 2017

The sheer wickedness of despots and their crime against humanity is well highlighted in the poem. A tragic piece of poetry bristling with emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain blessed. Please have a look at some of my poems.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 February 2017

Wickedness of hatred and war. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Xelam Kan™ 18 December 2016

what you've penned is so tragic and tormented, But what I am telling you, ponder it well... this is life and we are called Humans, the most brutal and stupid creatures, we will do such things again and again, thus time it has been doing by Indians, next time your neighbors will reply such acts.Politics and Religion in narrow sense cause all this barbarian acts. what i mean from long preface, change your thinking style(i know it's hard in present Kashmir) bcaz yiu will bring no good for yourself.Over 100,000 innocent ppl died during the last 30 years but do you see who cares? i am supporting your cause- Freedom- but the rest the world? turn your pen and thinking to some Sweet scenes and Develop good potic skill, i advise you two things: Read Read and write, hooe for your good safe living. xk

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Kim Barney 26 November 2016

Thanks for inviting me to read this poem. This is shocking and extremely sad. How anyone could do this is unimaginable. You told the story well, as far as it went. Perhaps you should include a poet's not to explain the situation further.

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B.u Afnan 26 November 2016

Thanks a lot Saadat Tahir ,for your encouraging response.Truely means a lot !

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Saadat Tahir 26 November 2016

its a sad poem that speaks eloquently and touchingly of this devastating reality there are no answers to this brutality of a crazed regime we heard of genocides, we heard of rapes used as a political tool..we heard of the holocaust and we heard of the rape of nanking... the systematic murder/displacement of indiginous populations this blinding of peaceful protesters is a new depth to which humanity has sunk...and this horrible regime has the dubious distinction to earn this infamy... they will not go unpunished for long.... this ultimate human tragedy has failed to gain the interst of world leaders and organisations that pride themselves on human rights.. shame and shame yet again! your effort is commnedable and moving... keep writing and best of luck sat

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