Monday, October 1, 2018

Eyes: A Poem In Two Parts Comments

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Eyes reach into a distance
no body can attain, and place
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Daniel Brick
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Glen Kappy 02 October 2018

Hey, Daniel! Hope this finds you well. In answer to your closing question—as I understand it—yes, one reality and one source. Funny or strange perhaps, to the opening of the first stanza my thought went to how our hearing as well carries our perception into the distance. More particularly I think of bird sounds. Walk in beauty, brother. -Glen

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2018

Eyes carry vision and help us to reach up to far places. Eyes carry power of humanity and through nature we reach up to higher realm. An interesting reality is revealed through this excellent poem. Through eyes we share love. An interesting poem is shared here...10

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