Sunday, May 17, 2009

Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

White like the moons wax and wane,
Silver like the drops of rain.
Gold like my pretty new find,
Green like a watermellons rine.
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Colin J... 16 June 2009

'Eye' love this poem... Colin J...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 May 2009

Luna, I love your lovely poem. You have described 13 colors with sweet imagery and concluded nicely: 'The color of your eyes I will never forget.' 10++

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