Thursday, May 22, 2008

Eyes Comments

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these eyes of blue
...have shown me true
my eyes of green seem so little to you
these calming eyes of brown seem to be never around
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mark bowdidge
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Ben Gieske 22 May 2008

I liked the way everything rhymed and fitted together. Amusing.

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Connie Chambers 22 May 2008

those eyes of yours keep me going all day

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mark bowdidge

mark bowdidge

stoneham, mass
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