Wednesday, May 2, 2018

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Eyes are the window of the soul
When I look your deep eyes
I feel calm in your eyes
No matter how deep I go
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Shelvakumari Thachayil
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Robert Murray Smith 02 May 2018

A good write. However, I would not start the poem with a cliche.

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Shelvakumari Thachayil

Shelvakumari Thachayil

Kozhikode, Kerala
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