I felt them on me today
Your hazel brown eyes
From the distance you stared
You came, you cared
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Great imagery is this very nicely written poem and congratulations on being POD! Eyes are the window to the soul! !
Very nice poem. I’ve always felt like a persons eyes were a highway to their soul.
We see the eyes clearly. Imagery is all that we need in a poem.
So lovely a poem describing the enchanting eyes that at times haunt us, so much so that we seldom get away from it. Thanks for the sharing and congratulations for being picked as the member poem of the day.
I felt them on me today Your hazel brown eyes From the distance you stared You came, you cared - - - - - - - - Our deepest emotions that we feel in our hearts are reflected in eyes.When it is the tender feeling of love, it is not easy to come out.A lovely write, thanks for sharing.
Amidst the flowers, amidst the trees You were there among the bees..you were there and your eyes. i am conscious of your eyes.. very fine way of expressing love- thank u dear poet. tony
From the distance! ! With the muse of the eyes. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Your haunting eyes couldn't leave me....here is the essence of the poem. A beautiful poem shared. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
Hazel Brown Eyes.. nearest of any bees..and trees! ! Among which on the lines of soil a flow poetry flows.. so perfect! Loved the seemingly free feelings as you wrote poet.. Allow me appreciate your poetic finesse no matter from where on the earth I am from! ! simply Superb! ! Ty and 10+ if you allow me to! !
A very delicate expression only a passionate lover could come up with. Congrats, Dear Poet & Thank You, Admin.
Simple and beautiful and touching. The lines flow in a very smooth way. Enjoyed. Congrats.
Dear poet, such a sublime poem of the day... congrats for being chosen... huge 10++++
I disliked the comment of The Muse and I liked the comment Hassan Hayati. It's a beautiful poem and a well deserved selection as member's poem. Congrats.
Dear Sir, Me too.. we have different cultures and different perception..and this Poem has come from western side of culture and we need to respect it the way it was expressed! ! .. I do agree though for your sincere expression! !
An amateurish poem. The Administrators of this site have no idea what is good or bad. So they choose bad.
A poem, direct and full of sense, some times the words we utter in our hearts, congratulations for being poem of the day.
Eyes are windows of the heart and all cares. This thought has been depicted in this beautifully crafted write. A great poem with compelling imagery.10