Sunday, April 15, 2018

Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.5

I felt them on me today
Your hazel brown eyes
From the distance you stared
You came, you cared
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Eyes are windows of the heart and all cares. This thought has been depicted in this beautifully crafted write. A great poem with compelling imagery.10

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Aqua Flower 01 May 2018

Great imagery is this very nicely written poem and congratulations on being POD! Eyes are the window to the soul! !

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Kelly Kurt 01 May 2018

I have long been an eye man. Congrats, GB

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Katie Webster 01 May 2018

Very nice poem. I’ve always felt like a persons eyes were a highway to their soul.

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Robert Murray Smith 01 May 2018

We see the eyes clearly. Imagery is all that we need in a poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 May 2018

So lovely a poem describing the enchanting eyes that at times haunt us, so much so that we seldom get away from it. Thanks for the sharing and congratulations for being picked as the member poem of the day.

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I agree with you Sir, it's such a beautiful poem.

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Bharati Nayak 01 May 2018

I felt them on me today Your hazel brown eyes From the distance you stared You came, you cared - - - - - - - - Our deepest emotions that we feel in our hearts are reflected in eyes.When it is the tender feeling of love, it is not easy to come out.A lovely write, thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 May 2018

Amidst the flowers, amidst the trees You were there among the bees..you were there and your eyes. i am conscious of your eyes.. very fine way of expressing love- thank u dear poet. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 May 2018

From the distance! ! With the muse of the eyes. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 May 2018

Your haunting eyes couldn't leave me....here is the essence of the poem. A beautiful poem shared. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Siddartha Montik 01 May 2018

Hazel Brown Eyes.. nearest of any bees..and trees! ! Among which on the lines of soil a flow poetry flows.. so perfect! Loved the seemingly free feelings as you wrote poet.. Allow me appreciate your poetic finesse no matter from where on the earth I am from! ! simply Superb! ! Ty and 10+ if you allow me to! !

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Rajnish Manga 01 May 2018

A very delicate expression only a passionate lover could come up with. Congrats, Dear Poet & Thank You, Admin.

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 May 2018

Simple and beautiful and touching. The lines flow in a very smooth way. Enjoyed. Congrats.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 May 2018

Dear poet, such a sublime poem of the day... congrats for being chosen... huge 10++++

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Akhtar Jawad 01 May 2018

I disliked the comment of The Muse and I liked the comment Hassan Hayati. It's a beautiful poem and a well deserved selection as member's poem. Congrats.

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Siddartha Montik 01 May 2018

Dear Sir, Me too.. we have different cultures and different perception..and this Poem has come from western side of culture and we need to respect it the way it was expressed! ! .. I do agree though for your sincere expression! !

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The Muse 01 May 2018

An amateurish poem. The Administrators of this site have no idea what is good or bad. So they choose bad.

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Kevin Foley 01 May 2018

Agree wholeheartedly.

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Hassan Hayati 01 May 2018

A poem, direct and full of sense, some times the words we utter in our hearts, congratulations for being poem of the day.

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