Saturday, October 18, 2014

Eyes Comments

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I swim in their wide oceans.
I fly around in their skies.
I pierce very deep into them;
When I look in their eyes.
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Md. Asadullah
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Sallam Yassin 20 October 2014

eyes are doors for inside in replica of soul in love they reflect and you painted it in gay colors of rainbow/ thanks bro to share

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Valsa George 19 October 2014

A person's inmost thoughts are often reflected in his eyes! Looking deep into his eyes, we are able to probe in to the depths of his heart! A poem that tells how our eyes mirror our thoughts! Great write!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 October 2014

when one becomes alien in other world..they think explored they feel..how long hiding will hide..just ride and ride thank u

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