Eyes Comments
Eyes blaze like the moon
In the darkness of incarcerated feelings
Like the gush of wishes
Eyes glow in the day like the sun.
...
Read full text
It is said that the eyes are the windows of the soul, which I believe is what you are saying here Ashly - lovely poem.
Yes! But poems are ears, and I hear, again, images moving effortlessly, yet under editing control. I see intelligent eyes deeply questioning. The result - 1 sentence with no breaks! Well-crafted, Ashly!
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/30/2025 11:59:28 PM # 1.0.0
A beautiful poem Ashly..You have portrayed beautiful picture of eyes. You are right, eyes reflects our emotions...its like mirror, we cannot hide from it. Loved reading your poem. Keep writing. God Bless.