Tuesday, April 3, 2012

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I captured your frame the moment I had seen,
I draw the fence around to keep you, mine,
I strengthen the security painting the lashes,
Coloring the boundary with reflective bases,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 06 April 2012

the first two lines are marvelous. a lovely love poem. shan

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Eric Cockrell 04 April 2012

very well written with passionate intensity!

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Raj Arumugam 03 April 2012

very loving lines, VS...the lines speak of a deep and intense love...

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