Eyes Comments

good lines written which brings out the love u ve on the person whom u ve in ur mind.

good writing on eyes of your s and your lover s10

this poem reminds me of my love sir

I love the nice short style :)

good poem......keep going..

You express hypnotism nicely from the view of one hypnotized....

Beautiful poem~ simply but delicately written, great work ~ Eyes are the windows of one's soul, you color the windows nicely!