Sunday, October 4, 2020

Eyed Dreams Comments

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In your wide-eyed dreams
doesn't it all go right?
What about shut-eyed dreams -
do they get entangled in the night?
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Nika McGuin
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 November 2020

Super poem, wonderful and expressed in great metaphor. Dreams and daydreams. Kudos! ! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'Babies cry anywhere '

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Khairul Ahsan 04 October 2020

A beautiful poem. 'but loneliness, the true thief of joy, threatens to ensnare me in a pitiful plight' - so well said, poetically!

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 October 2020

A poem on loneliness. Beautifully crafted. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed the flow and concept.

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 October 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Nika M. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Deluke Muwanigwa 04 October 2020

Excellent poem. Maam. The flow the rhymes the mood just right

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