Sunday, November 7, 2004

Eye To Eye Comments

Rating: 3.3

Quietly she reads
As my heart loudly pounds
Straight posture, her presence cedes
An eloquence that is beyond my slouching bounds.
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Robert L. Bixler III
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knot Available 07 November 2004

Proceed cautiously....it's the 'Crush'! Robert I like the subtle gestures you used to decsribe what a perosn notices in the beginning. The eyes have a major impact! Good Job!

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Robert L. Bixler III

Robert L. Bixler III

Tulsa, Oklahoma
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