Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Eye Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our bodies must produce sand
to block our sight
opening our senses
to the unembodied
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Cheryl Lynn Moyer Peele
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~ Jon London ~ 14 March 2009

Very well expressed words of pure gold, your lines are filled with wonderful flow of warmth Lovely piece Jon

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Tsira Goge 06 December 2008

Smell the sun erasing its light...... ............................................ Chery, very beautiful poems.......10........ Best wishes, Tsira

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Roger Cornish 09 November 2008

I like this..... 'I can taste a Mama Cass song.' great economy of style and depth....

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Cheryl Lynn Moyer Peele

Cheryl Lynn Moyer Peele

Montgomery, AL
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