Eye Of The Storm Comments

An excellent write, full of insight and showing your zeal. Greetings for having this gift

a poem that is just so well-written and that captures for the reader the power of its subject

eye of the storm just made a masterpiece.. great work

I like the colorful comparisons, you really put those images in my mind. Continue writing, you'll go far.

Wow Laurence, - - I am 'storm-bound' too with this well-crafted piece and all I can encourage you to do is to keep writing.... this is only a minute part of what your talented poetic mind will produce.... a sure 10 for this - - from Fay..

You show a great deal of understanding and maturity in your writing Laurence...thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us...10+++