Eye Of The Storm Comments

This is nothing short of extraordinary, bringing together the past, present and future, reminiscing on the past, taking the best out of the present and hoping for the brightest future. Well done.

Although this piece needs some work, I think it is well written. You'll need to improve the grammar and capitalization, etc... but it can be quite great if promoted. Keep up the good work! If you can, i'm trying to promote and get my work out there and known. I'm about to release my latest conceptual novelty and all twelve pieces are here on this site. They each cover 12 different areas in society that have been infiltrated by the powers that be. A few of them are; The Equation, (Big Banking) Orwellian Youth, (The Family Unit) Justis, (Law) and Each and Every Day (Food) .