Monday, June 26, 2006

Eye Of The Beholder Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw you standing there
gazing at yourself in the altogether
you've never seen yourself like this before
piercings not born out of the latest fad
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Christopher Cofield
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Ruby Root 13 July 2006

Hi Chris excellent poem, I am not sure if your writing about yourself or to about someone. It sounds like to me as the reader. Rediscovering who you are as a person. Excellent poem, great imagery and emotions. Take care!

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Ernestine Northover 05 July 2006

Very cleverly constructed poem Christopher. Rather like a canticle. Very unusual but very well produced. Love Ernestine XXX

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