I saw you standing there
gazing at yourself in the altogether
you've never seen yourself like this before
piercings not born out of the latest fad
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Very cleverly constructed poem Christopher. Rather like a canticle. Very unusual but very well produced. Love Ernestine XXX
Hi Chris excellent poem, I am not sure if your writing about yourself or to about someone. It sounds like to me as the reader. Rediscovering who you are as a person. Excellent poem, great imagery and emotions. Take care!