Eye (I) Monster Comments

Even though it was written in your childhood, now there is meaning in it, and it is real, and now you are a Poet, a Writer, a Journalist, and a Public Speaker. You proved that you are really a Multi- talented personality. Congratulations Aiswarya. I was watching you, and now You are real.

It took me by suspense till the end, when at last I found it was a dream. Thank God.

very nice and sweet. continue to write. read some of my poems too.

WOW! To be inspired by the shape of an alphabet, a symbol of ego, when most of us would have been at play. Indeed a treasure, your poem shows your potential and talent. Express your thought and emotions as poems and polish them at leisure into brilliant pieces of poetry. I love this work totally. Angel

aishu, kill those monsters with the spear of poetry................

So long as i and u r there Life can't be a fair affair. CP

your dream expressed in a beautiful way.

..beautiful lines T.Anish ....nice imagination in ur dream.....

Yes, our dreams can be wonderful inspiration for our writing. A delightful piece of fantasy. Irene

Yes, dreams can be scarey. Writing it down and sharing is a fine way to cope.

This is a scene in poetry with immense interest, very lovely indeed.

Dreams can be so real when we are in its clutch. I had many experiences of unimaginable dreams. Your dream is of a troubled mind. Troubled mind will see such dreams. Your language is nice and marvellous for your age. In the years to come we hope to see nice works from a poet in the making. All the best.

A+, on a Job Well done

Wow u r so talented realy i can see u a great poem within a few years keep it up

You are a gifted writer and this is an intriguing piece of work. You wrote this when you were 7 years old? Wow.

You are truly talented Keep It Up. This poem brought me back to my childhood when I would read my most favorite bed time stories. No matter what anyone tells you keep writing.

You ARE a talented poet. I hope the world soon knows your name.

I am lost for words. You are a gifted girl, my friend. Your poem receives a perfect 10. Thanx for sharing.

im sure the course you were studying made you dizzy lol. now you seeing dead people...ha ha. you are too good for your age. super

you are too good for your age good work.