Eye Dear Daddy Comments

A nice rhyming poem, 'Value and virtue will shine ever Shine ever, shine ever' - loved these lines!

I liked the title, I liked the thoughts and I liked the poem.

Part ONE This is amazingly set up, gorgeously created and so it sounds like a beautiful nursery rhyme or a musical poem, but it is NOT. It IZ what it IZ....a most ardent Devotional, it starts with a few words, but they grow in significance and finally this poems begs the reader to differ:

Part TWO this is an exceptional poem about the Heavenly Father, our God the Almighty and that Value and virtue will shine ever, Eye dear daddy. Sheer poetry, created with great smartness of the mind.

Part THREE This poems shows deepest insight through simple looking words, and is greatest in its meaning, the imaginations are lyrical, spiritual (by the words Heaven ridge and Eye Dear Daddy) and philosophical. I have great respect for the choice of words, which lead the reader

Part FOUR to the most important aspect of the poem: Heaven ridge that is made up with value and virtue will shine ever. The simple seeming words make this poem shines in greatness, this shows the great intelligence of the writer, and a greatest 10 PLUS well deserved. Thank you for creating

FINAL Part and sharing these finest words that made the poem a heavenly treat to read. I truly enjoyed this. With the very best wishes, sincerely, Sylvia Frances Chan

This sounds like a beautiful nursery rhyme! The repetition of lines gives it a lyrical effect!

Such a sweet musical poem, and thoughtful as well. A great work, a nice poem, I loved the flow of lines.

I like the rhythm of this piece it has the ring of London Bridge is falling down an old British nursery rhyme A great poem on living life well and with a good heart and virtuous spirit great piece 10 ++++

Mind and play! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Value and virtue will shine ever Shine ever, shine ever Value and virtue will shine ever, rhythms resound extraordinarily, great done

Mind and play will last long, Last long, last long, Mind and play will last long, wonderfully lyrically rhythmic rhyme, a great poetic expression is pictured ih this poem, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++++++++++++++++ 10