Saturday, October 27, 2018

Eye-Catcher In The Rays.... Comments

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my eye-catcher in the rays….
who knows how many ways
they have been walking, traveling
through heaviest forests and downpouring
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Chinedu Dike 02 November 2018

Good rendition of words embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing madam and do remain enriched.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 November 2018

Thank you so much for your sympathetic response, Chinedu. Your visit to my poem site and the wonderful comments are appreciated. God´s Blessings in Abundance be upon you perpetually. Amen

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 October 2018

Who knows how many ways? ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 November 2018

Thank you so much for your appreciated visit to my poem site, Edward. Kindest of you to pay me a visit again. I appreciate that perpetually. God Bless You Greatest, Edward, Amen.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 October 2018

Through the heaviest forest and through the downpours you have reached up to the enormous gate. Your eye-catcher in the rays knows about many many ways. This is wonderful. Concrete is dry but eye-catcher has taught imagery of autumn and felt the fate of life. The third person is never seen but she watches everything. A brilliant poem is well penned. Cold autumn morning's perception is amazing..10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 November 2018

I am perpetually thankful for your visits I most respect and the precious comments given. Your valuable feedback and the 10´s. Thank you so much dear Master Poet Kumarmani Sir. Your precious comments mean a very lot to me. God Blesses You and your beloved family, Amen.

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