Monday, November 23, 2009

Eyan Your Poet Comments

Rating: 5.0

For all my love is free
So enter this chamber
And read to your heart's desire
Because words painted
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Eyan Desir
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Jean Dament 12 December 2009

A heartfelt piece that expresses well the enjoyment you get from writing poetry. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us. Spiritsong

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Saeid Hadavand 06 December 2009

Nice try my friend. Go on.

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Nikunj Sharma 02 December 2009

the overall poem creates a friendly vibe...good flow, gentle and simple words and it warms the heart....this is a good poem...keep it up

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young writer Athira 30 November 2009

''from the mountain peak I'll pour my love gently on paper''........... Stunning Eyan.......

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. .... 28 November 2009

Oh men If I say I don't like your work I lie But....you can get even better.... with a little poetic touch..

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 27 November 2009

Not only for this one but also for the rest of yours i've read, i can say that you love what you write..and that's the reason why everyone(including me) love it too. You wrote it too good..simple and so the best.

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Luke Easter 27 November 2009

Complexity? It can't flow if it is, 'Complexity' Complexity tends to be used to characterize something with many parts in intricate arrangement. The study of these complex linkages is the main goal of network theory and network science. In science there are at this time a number of approaches to characterizing complexity, many of which are reflected in this article. Definitions are often tied to the concept of a ‘system’ – a set of parts or elements which have relationships among them differentiated from relationships with other elements outside the relational regime. Many definitions tend to postulate or assume that complexity expresses a condition of numerous elements in a system and numerous forms of relationships among the elements. At the same time, what is complex and what is simple is relative and changes with time. Some definitions key on the question of the probability of encountering a given condition of a system once characteristics of the system are specified. Warren Weaver has posited that the complexity of a particular system is the degree of difficulty in predicting the properties of the system if the properties of the system’s parts are given. In Weaver's view, complexity comes in two forms: disorganized complexity, and organized complexity. [1] Weaver’s paper has influenced contemporary thinking about complexity. [2] The approaches which embody concepts of systems, multiple elements, multiple relational regimes, and state spaces might be summarized as implying that complexity arises from the number of distinguishable relational regimes (and their associated state spaces) in a defined system.

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Merna Ibrahim 27 November 2009

I can see a great poet through your meaningful poems...10s

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 November 2009

Every artist dips his brush in his own soul, and paints his own nature into his pictures.

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Simply beautiful poetry Eyan. Inviting the reader in to your heart and mind is a wonderful idea and I think it would be stunning on your biography. love Karin

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Beka ? ? ? 26 November 2009

nice poem i enjoyed it

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Romeo Della Valle 25 November 2009

Now I can see clearly, the man behind the mask, great work, keep it up Eyan, you have a long way to go and a lot to show....You got my vote...10++++

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i dig this poem wonderful poem this be.

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Luwi Habte 24 November 2009

what a Gentle man on the paper Eyan I can see your vivid ideas and I can imagine how smart and talented you are let me call you a great poet, and a gentle man on paper. we all love you Eyan, best wishes ur pen friend luwi

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Catrina Heart 23 November 2009

Awesome self ode, well delivered thoughts and feelings, fine flow of figurative language....Great lines touching your readers heart and you have captivated your readers interest here! ! ! well done.........

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Lady Grace 23 November 2009

owwwwwwww...my goshhhhhhhh...ok...ok..ok...i like this line''this pages are filled ''.....it means, there are lots of things to be introduced, will happen, will occur, will be seen...so nice this construction ian.. the smiles in my lips when i read these words from ur page are as sweet as chocolate of the undying love from yesterday.. so nice ur poem ian, , this will go again to my fav..and u must be proud of that ha..heheheheh...i thought ur just jokin that u will write poem ''later''...waaaaaaaaaaaa...but later is only a half an hour after my request...so express ha...well, it may be a coincidence maybe..but thanks for the favor u gave...that i want another poem from u to be read by me today..i lav this..thanks my dear rabbit... and to all of ian's readers..please dont get surprized if i call him rabbit dear...its just a friendship endearment....ian is a very good friend and he is a very polite guy...but sometimes he teases as he pleases...so...that's ian, my dearest rabbit...smileeeeeeeeeeeee....hmmmmmmmm, hope these wrds are allowed here in ur pages...u know already if i write like this, , if i joke, , , thats becoz i am sad....thanks ian my dear for this poem..i enjoyed reading it...''the poet, eyan''...even if how many times you'll be the greatest poet, but for me...ur still my dearest rabbit dear..keep up the good works...ur becoming the best ian...and am so proud of it...i always pray for ur success....GOD BLESS....

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Eyan Desir 23 November 2009

Thank you for reading...... Special thanks to all my friends.....

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