Seated behind the mask
Exploding with emotion
Determination!
Burns around his core
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''Metaphors from his heart Excretes juices of love Buckets of laughter The taste of pleasure The sweetest of sugar'' nice cognitive metaphor, dear Eyan, lovely to read..10+++ from me
true Beauty comes from withen, I love your style! your smiple grace, the flow, the words, the way words just pore out and always work. you are good! ! ! ! !
Sited behind the mask Exposing with emotion Determination! That is the poet, actual....Loved it...10+...Brishti
Great work as always really enjoy your use of words Thank you 10++++++
How you present yourself to the world is is being proud of yourself and so you should be, and you don't need a mask! ....+++++10 regards
WOW! ! I love this Poem I think one day (if you really wanted) you could be come a very good poet..Somethine like Jack Perlutsky but with a twist. The way you described this poem made me almost see your feelings i love it! Dont give up and Keep writing -Melissa P.S. im going to read others, hope you dont mind.
a fantastic write bibliography.......a confidence filled poem........you are the future...... you are the ray of hope of the future.........
Dear Eyan, How many mask you are wearing? The best one is to make others laugh.You have done that quite often. Now an auto bahn of confidence that flows like electricitythroughout the poem. Th is is the crux of the feature o f a poet 's self- confidence. The idea of dedicating it to yourself is great. for its fluent transition and poetic expression, you deserve onlyA-10 -Rajkumar
I like your idea of dedicating a poem to yourself....thinking poetry out of the box...real cool indeed! !
that's some cool objective analysis...hw many secs, this one?
This is one the finest poems i had read on this site...the reason is not its content but its theam. Splendid job.
I like your poem. You are very confident and one of the best on this site. I wish you much continued succes with your poems keep on penning them for us! And guess what because you listed so many styles and emotions: That makes you a Poet for all seasons! 10++++++ J. L.
yeah you are true poet indeed Eyan...your emotions flows through your poem...so beautiful...thank for your poems 10++
am sure i was already at this page...the poet himself, authored his own words by his gleaming lines, by his passion, kindness and thru these skills i appreciate this poet's ability...ian, hope, this will lead to stardom of fame, , as i see ur eyes, it never surrender to the darkness of the night, ..the shadow of your kindness will always inspire my works.....u r the best, u know that...lavs ya...