Tuesday, May 26, 2009

.... Eyan! The Poet Comments

Rating: 3.8

Seated behind the mask
Exploding with emotion
Determination!
Burns around his core
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Eyan Desir
COMMENTS
Lady Grace 23 April 2010

am sure i was already at this page...the poet himself, authored his own words by his gleaming lines, by his passion, kindness and thru these skills i appreciate this poet's ability...ian, hope, this will lead to stardom of fame, , as i see ur eyes, it never surrender to the darkness of the night, ..the shadow of your kindness will always inspire my works.....u r the best, u know that...lavs ya...

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Marieta Maglas 19 July 2009

''Metaphors from his heart Excretes juices of love Buckets of laughter The taste of pleasure The sweetest of sugar'' nice cognitive metaphor, dear Eyan, lovely to read..10+++ from me

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Obinna Eruchie 18 July 2009

It is interesting to read, showing us what goes on inside.

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Janell Cressman 16 June 2009

true Beauty comes from withen, I love your style! your smiple grace, the flow, the words, the way words just pore out and always work. you are good! ! ! ! !

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real good poem keep it up

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Karamia Smith 10 June 2009

this is beautiful! i love it!

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Brishti Mazumdar 08 June 2009

Sited behind the mask Exposing with emotion Determination! That is the poet, actual....Loved it...10+...Brishti

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The Dreamer 08 June 2009

Great work as always really enjoy your use of words Thank you 10++++++

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Ken E Hall 07 June 2009

How you present yourself to the world is is being proud of yourself and so you should be, and you don't need a mask! ....+++++10 regards

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Melissa Ramey 06 June 2009

WOW! ! I love this Poem I think one day (if you really wanted) you could be come a very good poet..Somethine like Jack Perlutsky but with a twist. The way you described this poem made me almost see your feelings i love it! Dont give up and Keep writing -Melissa P.S. im going to read others, hope you dont mind.

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rago rago 05 June 2009

a fantastic write bibliography.......a confidence filled poem........you are the future...... you are the ray of hope of the future.........

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 05 June 2009

Dear Eyan, How many mask you are wearing? The best one is to make others laugh.You have done that quite often. Now an auto bahn of confidence that flows like electricitythroughout the poem. Th is is the crux of the feature o f a poet 's self- confidence. The idea of dedicating it to yourself is great. for its fluent transition and poetic expression, you deserve onlyA-10 -Rajkumar

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Sandra Martyres 05 June 2009

I like your idea of dedicating a poem to yourself....thinking poetry out of the box...real cool indeed! !

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Indira Babbellapati 05 June 2009

that's some cool objective analysis...hw many secs, this one?

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Alen Alexander 05 June 2009

cool, liked it! totally different great theme!

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Kranthi Pothineni 04 June 2009

This is one the finest poems i had read on this site...the reason is not its content but its theam. Splendid job.

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Jack Price 03 June 2009

I like your poem. You are very confident and one of the best on this site. I wish you much continued succes with your poems keep on penning them for us! And guess what because you listed so many styles and emotions: That makes you a Poet for all seasons! 10++++++ J. L.

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Shashendra Amalshan 02 June 2009

yeah you are true poet indeed Eyan...your emotions flows through your poem...so beautiful...thank for your poems 10++

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creative. compelling.. maker of his own way

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Catrina Heart 29 May 2009

Truly a confident man behind the mask...............10

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