It's long since I stopped believing in human wisdom.
Long since I stopped distinguishing wisdom of the old - and
Stupidity of the new generation
It's un-intelligible to know what the new generation does differently
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I like the repetitive use of the question But isn't that the problem because it reinforces the poet's thoughts. I also like that you compare and contrast the two generations. Your words are of depth and the message is on point. but i gotta ask, why is failure always related to mother, why? Let not your pen run dry of ink poet!
A refined poetic imagination, Gedion. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
One more thing, kindly find time to go through my three poems: It Hurts, If You Should Please Me and Days of Our Lives. I'd appreciate a review or critique