Extortion Comments

With few opportunities in life. Thanks for sharing.

Well done very gud depiction if human mind set, like to give 10, thanks

I thank you for your positive feedback Nice of you to suggest a more apt ending to the poem. But, I don't expect to dictate your poetic works with my poetic attitude and I certainly don't expect you to suggest endings for my works. It is as if a Ph.D student works on his dissertation for a good 3 to 4 years and then has to accept the thesis propounded by another Doctorate holder. I invite criticism, reporting, grammatical correction but not an addition to my poem. I hope you will treat this message with objectivity and not presume a personal reference only to yourself.

and just like the rose that never loses it fragrance an extortionist never withdraws from playing his game.. a new and an uncommon idea is developed. Extortionist. extort. Extortion. wonderful poem thank you. tony