Dreaming in my wakeful hours;
I am tired of this extended imagination.
Life is an art,
I know;
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life the enormous concept....and u try to paint it on a canvas.....alas! where everyone fails, i wish u find all the right colors!
A stunning poem. So well written. Loved it - especially the ending: /I can't break the landscape of my life/On the canvas of my brain/. These lines are intensely beautiful and I can identify with them. Thank you for a fine read.
:) admiring slab. i loved it man. thanks for sharing Ric Dhodi.
A very good poem Kamran! You want to paint the landscape of your life on the canvas of your brain. Well, it is already painted there and you know the genetic wonders. The colours and codes are all written there. You want to go beyond dreams through the night-watch but you can not start the journey from doomsday.Extended imagination is a beautiful composition of yours to express incapablity of reaching the destination.