Thursday, July 12, 2012

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Why don't you throw a kiss or two my way?
Will it be tomorrow or today?
So you'll know, I'll be praying you'll stay
Right in my arms where our heartbeats will play.
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Mark Trajano
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Dr Antony Theodore 28 August 2018

Why don't you send a smile from there to here? Will you wait for the horizon to clear? As God is in me i go forward.......... why dont u send me a kiss. a prayer, a wish, love, God... a mixture of all ideas and feelings. both human and divine......... thank u dear poet for this poem. tony

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Hazel Durham 27 September 2012

A beautiful heartfelt poem with amazing rhythm and flow, great write, i really enjoyed it!

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 14 July 2012

powerful rhythm that flows with apt choice of words. I enjoyed it and could relate to it well. Well penned

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