Tuesday, June 30, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

the sky is submerged with earth
planets, standstill
and frozen in cosmos
lives are flickers
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ritty patnaik
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Bob Blackwell 26 July 2009

I concur this is poetry. Does it really matter, are we meant to know? Live life, enjoy all the truth's we find, care, give love without expecting and share. Wonderful verse, short but says so much. Bob

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premji premji 05 July 2009

that's called poetry~

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