Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Expressing Myself Comments

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I'm caught in this moment to express how I feel
I want to tell you now, just want to keep it real.
All the troublesome, lies, anger, and hate; we've been through it all caused by a fake. Can you honestly say you made a change in your life?
negative or positive, call it what you want it to be because I'ma say negative, Ima push you to the side and stay the hell out of it.
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Dave Walker 05 October 2011

A lot of emotion. It looks like you got a lot Of your pain out in this. Great poem.

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Talal Athar 05 October 2011

there's one cage of pain above. really well written, depicts alot about teenagers life. expressing yourself! ! ! great

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