Friday, May 8, 2009

Expressed Comments

Rating: 5.0

Marinated in your nightlong concoctions
life melts lusciously in my mouth
but this fond fondling
these grammatically challenged
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Rehan Hyder
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Marieta Maglas 31 May 2009

I think that you mean in poetry that the words fail to express the thoughts.It is entirely true, sometimes we have thoughts so great that words fail to fully outline.These thoughts are very powerful and they make us to be more real, more beautiful, more humans....10+++

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Viola Grey 10 May 2009

and very well expressed at that....sometimes what we thought was so sweet melts bitterly in our mouths...I know someone with a bag of hugs, should you need them :)

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For someone who misplced their hands, you most certainly ''FOUND' a way to continue expressing yourself via The Written Word! Sterling Work Mr._____________________________-....You sure it isn't your name that was misplaced b BY your witty hands upon keypads...? ~~~~~~~~ I'm waving goodbye, for now...LOL!

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brilliant poem my friend..amazing write!

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Joseph Poewhit 08 May 2009

Things change in life

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