Monday, November 9, 2020

Exposure Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to expose a world built on myths
With poems that punch a hole through the night.
I want to shed light on an unblessed age
With the aid of time - honoured maps and guides.
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Shaun Cronick 09 November 2020

Dominic, I always class it as foolish neglect. Our methods and human thoughts to let things go, to go, to seed, to go to pot, to escape us. When we could be a lot more than a lost virtue(s) . And then we as a species backtrack after our mistakes and then pick up the pieces and start again., perhaps for the better, who knows. A perceptive poem and a food for thought one too. Five stars and take care

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