Tuesday, October 24, 2017

Exposition Comments

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I passed the tunnel
Dividing the self and foreign,
And I touched the walls
And I torched them;
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Pinaki Dewan
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Chinedu Dike 14 November 2018

An insightful rendition elegantly brought forth in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Pinaki.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2017

You brilliantly torched the walls through tender light to remove pain and give joy. Passing the tunnel is adventurous. Plethora of emotions flows but music of mind does not initiate singing in deepest sorrows. Revealing purposes motivates mind. This is an amazing poem brilliantly penned thought provoking poem on grief and joy....10

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Pinaki Dewan 25 October 2017

Thank you so much, Sir.. This means a lot..

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