Thursday, October 13, 2016

Explorer Of Love Comments

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I want to travel over the hills of your heart.
I want to dive into the depths that is the ocean of your soul.
I want to speed down the electric lanes of your mind.
You are something other than what I've known of humankind, and I'm ready to discover why you've remained a secret yet defined.
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Leah Ayliffe
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Daniel Brick 18 November 2016

This is a poem of Liberation and Fulfillment. I read it after reading and commenting on SUNDAY LOVE but it conforms everything I said in reaction to that poem. This is a visionary poem that is rooted in reality and it will pull that reality (which is always limited) into its higher plane of being. (In contrast, I write visionary poems rooted in the Imagination that have no connection to reality; they only exist in the IMAGINAL world.) I sense a readiness and momentum in this poem; it's a fully charged source of energy. Not all poems can be the basis for life actions, and it's always a risk to follow the visionary B-U-T that's the way back to the Paradise Garden! which is our birthright. Don't share what I'm saying poetically with a prose person, they think there is only one sanity and everything else is insanity. They would never embrace Hart Crane's ethos of Eros: And so it was that I entered the broken world / To trace the visionary company of love, its voice / An instant in the wind... That sky lifts love in its shower. (THE BROKEN TOWER)

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