Sunday, January 24, 2016

Exploding In Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a volcano
in destructive pain
to my totality
in explosive dreams
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Michael Walkerjohn
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Roseann Shawiak 26 January 2016

Very vivid and intense wording, drives home the pain from your words into my mind. Extremely emotional poem, felt throughout my being. Excellent imagery, it brings the feelings to the surface where our hearts can grasp them. Extraordinary poem! 10+++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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