Tuesday, January 26, 2016

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I am alive
I am awake
I am present
But yet half awake
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Lizelle 'Leasel' Martins
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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 26 January 2016

Displaying a broken heart well. Nice work.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 January 2016

The plight of a person under a sort of depression correctly narrated. It is, however, necessary to remember that life is full of ups and downs and dawn follows a night. Thus, one must struggle to come out of depression to greet the waiting dawn of happiness. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Lizelle 'Leasel' Martins

Lizelle 'Leasel' Martins

Johannesburg, South Africa
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