Saturday, September 16, 2006

Explain Comments

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Explain all the lies you bore into my heart
Explain the feeling of mistrust I had from the start
Explain all the problems you claimed to have fixed
Explain all the confusion you twisted and mixed
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Evy Moore
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Giuliana Watson 18 September 2006

that was truly touching! ! i might have enjoyed it much more if it was longer... if possible! it would be useless to keep writing, but lose the tone.

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q f 16 September 2006

Very inspirational, written with true feeling. I enjoyed that, it was short, but it conveyed the message and got so much out in so little words.

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